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May 21st, 2012, 1:12 pm





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Hey Guys!^^

I'm kinda worried. Do you think there was too much talking at the last pages and too little doing? It's important for me to let you know the characters but if it slows down the story I could scatter it a little more in the future^^

I'm not sure when I'm able to upload the next page 'cause I'm pretty sick right now D:
and I have to work overtime the next days DX
Schizo-and-Phrenic, May 21st, 2012, 11:52 am Reply
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awww poor thing hope u get to feeling better soon:).....sharpens claws...launches at his face and proceds to shred it
Nope cuz there's lots of doing and not a whole lot of dialogue here so it balances it out. It's totes fine.
it's perfect! :) i love flashbacks. <3 I hope you get to feel better. i'm srry your sick and have to work overtime. *gives you and Izzy candy*
LOL:) I think you just fanserveced!
aw I hope you get to feelin' better soon D:

and I think that it's very well balanced as far as story telling (learning about the characters etc) and things happening as far as action wise :3
@CareBearCara101:
I'm not even doing this on purpose XD
It always looks more dramatic than fan service-y in my head XD
@jadeann:
I'm glad, 'cuz there will be much more flashbacks X)
I love to do flashbacks to explain why a character acts the way he/she does ^^

Yesh, Candy! *,*
@YaoiGirl09:
Lot's of thankys! ^^

Azrael deserves a nice face-shred! XD
*DROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL*
Sharing blood like that is dangerous! You never know if there are pathogens!

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